快开学了，我来分析篇我的一篇英语作文

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快开学了，我来分析篇我的一篇英语作文

快开学了，我来分享一篇篇我发到英语作文网的英语作文
My hometown is in the Yangtze River on the edge, so, I especially love the beautiful home -- mountain and river.


    Mountain home real unity, a seat next to a seat, who also don't leave who, like friends solidarity; mountain home really strange ah, it is a peak alone beautiful, nor the three five peak echo, but thousands of Wan Ren long winding; mountain home really green ah, like the green barrier as freshmen, grass green, let a person feel fresh after watching. Mountain home when it was raining as a shadowy, a quiet and modest maiden, is shy with a white handkerchief, his face covered as said of a woman or maiden. These mountains in the rain, looks very clear, as if on the mountain of every tree and bush can see. From afar, the mountains green color makes people more comfortable.


    The Yangtze River is also not inferior. The Changjiang River is really quiet, quiet like a no polished mirror; the Yangtze River water really green ah, green as a piece of pure jade; the Yangtze River water is beautiful, a place with a characteristic, people baikanbuyan. Early in the morning, sit boat on the Yangtze River, will find the river with a thin layer of mist, like a layer of gauze, let a person feel like into the land of idyllic beauty in general. http://www.51yyzw.com


    Although the home no places of historic interest and scenic beauty, nor the number of scenic beauty, but still can be described as " the boat Bibo, in the middle picture."

山路w

又是一篇中式英語（Chinglish）作文。这个广告软文太差了。

pingkany

觉得自己对英文有点理解，大体上能懂，但貌似具体上……